JP: Plotchangers: S1E1- Muldoon Survives

Sci-Fi King25

     Robert Muldoon, Jurassic Park's game warden, aims his SPAS-12 at a Velociraptor. He knew that they were hunting, so he sent Ellie Sattler to go to the power shed while he stayed to fend off the raptors. Right when Muldoon is about to shoot, another raptor, the Big One, bursts her head out of the clearing and snarls.

     "Clever girl" Muldoon says as the Big One is about to lunge. However, before she can, a green glob lands on her cheek. She hisses and looks in the direction of which the glob came from. She sees a Dilophosaurus whth its frill open. The smaller carnivore hisses and leaps onto the Big One, but the other Velociraptor comes in and attacks the Dilophosaurus. As Muldoon runs off, both raptors quickly finish off the Dilophosaurus. 

Sci-Fi King25

What did you guys think? Mr.Happy, I knew you would like this one.

Lord Vader

Nice. Perhaps, next time, you could elaborate on how it would change the plot. Still, nice job on this, it saves Muldoon without changing the Rex's epic finale.

Originally, the scene was supposed to have Hammond shoot the Raptors, not Rexy taking them out. It would have been better if Muldoon had taken out the Raptors (as opposed to Hammond). If they had Muldoon kill the Rex in the movie, I'd have mixed feelings about it, but only a badass can kill a Rex.

Sci-Fi King25

Thanks for the advice. I heard about the original ending once. The writers and director changed it because they felt Rexy needed to be in the movie one last time.

Something Real

SCI-FI KING25 - That was fun! I've always felt that Muldoon's death in the movie was a cop-out - he was one of my absolute favorite characters in the book! :)

Lord Vader

I know, and you're welcome.

Rex Fan 684

I liked Muldoon, but I'm content with the ending they had. It's really hard to beat this...

But I like how the Dilo pulled a Rexy and saved someone from the raptors :)

Sci-Fi King25

Thanks for the positive feedback everybody!!!   :D

Raptor-401

Thank you!!! Seriously, who was the genuis who killed Mulddon off!!?? Nice story so far. by the way.

Sci-Fi King25

Thanks! Because of all the good feedback, I might post Episode 2 later today or tomorrow.

Raptor-401

Do whatever suits you, Sci-Fi King.

JRR

i love it ,when i watched JP i alwais was like  ''why did they kill off muldon?'' he was my favorite JP character